A Surprise Visit (Pokemon)
A Surprise Visit (Pokemon)
Poll Winner
Themes: Anal Sex, Breeding, Foursome
Summary: After Ash wins the Alolan Pokemon Tournament, he feels like something is missing. As though the victory is hollow without someone to share it with. Sure, he has Pikachu but it's not quite what he's looking for. That night, Ash gets a surprise as May and Serena show up to celebrate his win with Mallow as a late arrival.
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“Pikaaaa Piiii…”
Chuckling as Pikachu flops onto his back on the floor of the hotel suite’s common area, Ash Ketchum can’t help but nod.
“Yeah, you overdid it a little bit buddy… but really, you earned it.”
It was true. While Pikachu might have gone a little hard on the Poke Treats and decadent desserts in the celebration they’d just got back from, Ash couldn’t deny that he deserved to go a little overboard. After all, the two of them… they were now Alolan Pokemon Champions. It still felt a little surreal, that they’d actually won the Tournament. After so many years traveling together, after so many different tries in so many different Pokemon Leagues… this was where they won.
They were so far from home, and that hurt a little bit. Ash had already gotten off of the phone with his mom and Professor Oak, who had both called to congratulate him and let him know they’d been watching on TV. Of course, Ash had gone to the trouble of sending them tickets so they could come to Alola themselves to see him win in person… but in the end it just hadn’t worked out.
Hm, maybe that was why he was feeling a little empty inside at the moment? Scratching at the five o’clock shadow on his chin, the young man sighs as he watches Pikachu’s overstuffed belly slowly begin to rise and fall, signifying that his most faithful and trusted companion was finally falling into a proper food coma.
Giving Pikachu one last grin, Ash moves from the common area towards the suite’s master bedroom. As the new Alolan Champion, he was entitled to certain… benefits that came with the position. This place was one such benefit, and given his victory was literally today, this was the first time he was getting to properly explore it since becoming Champion.
He wasn’t sure what he was expecting to find in the bedroom… but what he does find nevertheless shocks him to his core. Or rather, it’s WHO he finds waiting for him there that causes Ash to go wide-eyed and stop dead in his tracks.
“… H-Hey Ash. Welcome back~”
“L-Like what you see?”
There, laid out on a bed that’s frankly too big for just one person, are two very familiar girls. Two very good friends of his… but in this moment, they aren’t acting merely like platonic friends. No, both May and Serena are dressed down, wearing nothing but skimpy and sexy lingerie that barely hides any of their feminine forms as they pose for him on the bed in matching seductive poses.
“I… uh… I…”
Sharing a grin, the two young women giggle to each other, with May piping up first.
“I think he does like what he sees…”
Serena isn’t far behind, however.
“I think you’re right, May.”
Slowly, the two lingerie-clad girls crawl off the bed and onto the floor, making their way over to him. Ash stares. One of them, May, is from the Hoenn Region and is someone he’s known for what feels like a third of his life by this point. They’d met when they were still kids, and grown-up side by side on different life paths. May was a Pokemon Coordinator, preferring Pokemon Contests instead of Pokemon Battles.
Serena, meanwhile, was another former traveling companion of his. He’d known her for less time, but nevertheless, he definitely had developed a significant crush on her. Just like May, Serena was a Pokemon Coordinator at heart, rather than a Trainer who went out seeking to challenge Gym Leaders and the Pokemon League.
They were, without a doubt, two of Ash’s precious people. They were also girls that he couldn’t deny… he’d long carried torches for. Now they were in front of him, reaching for his crotch, removing his pants and pulling out his cock. His blush only grows brighter when the two young women stop for a moment at the sight of his cock. He’s already half-hard… but even at half-mast, he’s quite… big.
“Oh wow…”
“It’s amazing.”
Without further ado, they attack his dick together. Tongues swirl around his shaft, moving along his length and over his balls. Ash groans, as their hands also cover the places their mouths can’t. They’re both so eager, and this is all moving so damn fast. Ash can’t do much more than stare down at them both in disbelief, shocked that this is even happening. When Serena finally works up the courage to dive down his dick and begin sucking at it dutifully, May takes the chance to pull back and give him a grin.
“I know this is all a little sudden, Ash. But Serena and I got to talking one night… and we realized, the two of us both want you for ourselves.”
O-Oh. He sort of wished he’d known that earlier. Then again, he didn’t necessarily need the distractions when he had the Tournament to win, so maybe not.
“At first, we saw each other as competitors. We started challenging one another to do better in Pokemon Contests. Whoever won the most would get you for themselves.”
Blinking, Ash furrows his brow.
“Won… the most?”
May blushes and then nods shyly.
“… We’ve been competing for you for over a year.”
That makes Ash’s eyes go wide, but clearly something had changed because they weren’t competing anymore, now were they?
“And yet, when all was said and done, when the final Pokemon Contest of the year was finished just last week… we realized something truly spectacular. Our little contest had ended in a tie.”
Ash gasps at that, though the explosion of breath also happens because Serena’s tongue traces out and licks at his balls for a moment as she gets pretty far down the length of his cock. He hadn’t been keeping track of May and Serena’s record this year. Honestly, he felt a bit like a bad friend, because he hadn’t even realized they were competing with each other.
Oh sure, he knew they were competing, like every other Pokemon Coordinator, but he hadn’t known they were at each other’s throats. They’d hid it well from him… or he’d simply been too distracted chasing his own dream.
May’s eyes dance with amusement, as she watches Serena gurgle up and down his cock.
“In the end… we decided there was only one option. We’d both won… so we would share you. I-If that’s okay with you of course… if not, you could choose one of us over the other, I suppose.”
At those words, Serena pulls off of his cock and the two young women stare up at him expectantly, waiting for him to decide what happens next. Looking back down at them… Ash knows exactly what he wants to do.
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“Oooooh~”
“Mmmm~”
Moans fill the Champion Suite’s master bedroom, as Ash drives his cock first into Serena’s cunt, and then pulls out and plunges into May’s next. He fucks them with slow but purposeful thrusts, going deep into each of them, one after the other.
As for the girls themselves… they’re laid out on the bed on their sides, their legs lifted up into the air and draped over either of his shoulders. Their bodies are pressed firmly together, the lingerie discarded so that their breasts and nipples can rub against one another as they hold each other in a proper lover’s embrace.
“T-To think… Ash would want this kind of thing from u-us…”
“A-All year I’ve seen you as my rival… and now we’re l-like this…”
Both May and Serena are blushing profusely as they alternate between staring into each other’s eyes with uncertainty filling their gazes… and looking down at Ash’s cock, plunging into one of them and then the other again and again. They bite their lower lips and let out matching whimpers that Ash finds rather cute, even as he grins wickedly and runs his hands along their raised legs.
“That’s right. You’re going to be my girlfriends from now on… so you’re going to have to get along. It’s time to kiss and make up, you two.”
Amusingly enough, despite the situation, Ash DOESN’T actually mean for them to kiss in that moment. It’s just a saying, and that’s all he means it to be. But of course, given the position he has the two young women in, May and Serena don’t see it that way.
“O-Oh…”
“… O-Okay…”
Looking into each other’s eyes, the Pokemon Coordinators hesitate for only a moment more before finally leaning in and kissing one another. Ash’s eyes widen in surprise at this, but his cock also surges in renewed arousal. Grunting, he fucks both of them with additional purpose, continuing to split his focus evenly between their sopping wet, tightly clenching cunts as they makeout with one another.
This continues on for quite some time, the noises of him sliding in and out of the both of them interspersed with May and Serena’s moaning kissing of one another. Watching them ‘make up’ on his behalf makes Ash feel all kinds of good… though to be fair, that could also just be how good their bodies feel as he fucks each of them with his throbbing member.
Finally, the two pull apart from their lip lock for a moment and whisper to one another. Ash watches this, blinking and slowing down a little bit as they turn to face him in unison, their faces bright red while they cling to each other.
“A-Ash… we would like it…”
“That is… we know you’re getting close…”
Finally, they bite the bullet and say it at the same time.
“”Please cum inside of us! We want to carry your children!””
Ash’s eyes widen as their words actually manage to overlap with one another, the two somehow completely in sync in that moment. And frankly? The very idea of Serena and May pregnant with his babies… its enough to tip Ash over the edge at long last. There’s only one problem, he’s only got one dick and they both want him to breed them.
For now, he hastily shoves his cock into May’s cunt, filling her with his dick and pumping half of his load into her womb. Then, after a few seconds, he pulls out and does the same with Serena. He has no clue just how long he’s going to cum, so he makes an effort to switch between them here as well, so that he cums in them both as close to equally as he possibly can.
When he’s finally done, Ash pulls back with a pant, having left their cunts incredibly messy. Moaning, the two young women wiggle and writhe with one another, lazy grins and lidded eyes showing him that he’s done well in pleasuring them both. Given it’s his first time with his new girlfriends, Ash won’t lie… he’s glad to have impressed them. Frankly, he was just making it up as he went along and-
C-CRASH!
Whipping around, Ash looks to the door of the bedroom at the same time May and Serena jolt up and do so as well. For a second, he thinks Pikachu woke up and caught them going at it, something that mortifies him to his core. But no, his most treasured Pokemon is still sleeping off his food coma. Rather, someone HAD caught them though… or rather, they’d caught someone spying on them.
There, having accidentally pushed the door too far open, is Mallow, the Trial Captain of Akala Island’s Lush Jungle. The dark-skinned, green-haired young woman blushes profusely at being caught in the act… literally. While one hand had accidentally been putting more and more weight on the open door she was peeking through, the other hand had been buried in her shorts, fingering her cunt.
“… S-Sorry! U-Um! I’ll go, I’m sorry-!”
“No… stay…”
Ash can’t say what comes over him, but when he glances at May and Serena, they blink before smiling and nodding. They’re actually willing to let him add another girlfriend to their relationship. He really is the luckiest man in the world.
Mallow also seems to realize this… before blushing profusely and slowly crawling forward.
“O-Okay… but I really can’t be getting pregnant right now… so you’ll have to take me in m-my other hole…”
And that’s how Ash finds himself crouching over Mallow as the petite dark-skinned Grass-type Trainer bends over the bed. Face down, ass up, she whimpers as she reaches back and spreads her ass cheeks apart with both hands. Ash is still a little uncertain… but apparently, anal sex was a normal thing that people who liked each other but didn’t want to get pregnant did with one another.
Who was he to doubt Mallow on that front? With a grunt, he begins to shove his cock inside of her ass. Mallow lets out a keening wail that makes him immediately stop at first, but then, gasping, she shakes her head.
“N-No! D-Don’t stop! Keep going!”
So… he does. It takes time, and luckily his cock is all messy with May and Serena’s juices still, but slowly but surely, he buries inch after inch of his dick in Mallow’s ass. The Trial Captain moans and groans up a storm, her hands eventually falling away from her ass cheeks once he’s deep inside of her back door. Meanwhile, Ash’s eyes have alit upon Mallow’s green ponytails… and in the end, he can’t stop himself.
Reaching out, he grabs her by her hair and yanks her head backwards. As her face lifts up from the bed and her spine arches, Mallow is confronted with May and Serena’s watching faces, the two other young women clearly curious about this new form of sex that they’re watching take place. Whatever they see in Mallow’s contorting expression is enough to make them blush and start fingering one another though, even as Ash continues railing her back door for all he’s worth.
He never thought anything like this would happen in a million years. He certainly didn’t think he’d come back from winning the Tournament to find May and Serena waiting for him in bed in sexy lingerie. Or that Mallow would end up coming in late and begging him to fuck her ass.
But one thing was for sure… Ash didn’t have any regrets. Mallow’s ass felt just as amazing as May and Serena’s cunts had felt. Fucking into her tight, dark-skinned body felt absolutely spectacular. He couldn’t get enough of the way her insides were clinging to his pistoning cock, and judging by her squealing moans, Mallow couldn’t get enough either.
In the end, he cums inside of her just like he did with May and Serena. Unlike with them, there’s little risk of Mallow getting pregnant, given he creampies her bowels and not her womb. And as he pulls out of her, Ash grunts, falling onto his back on the bed, well and truly tired out. As he lays there, all three of his new girlfriends cuddle in close to him, rubbing against different parts of his body. And Ash just smiles, happy as can be.
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